Ode to the greatest song in the world

"Declaration of my feelings for you
Elaboration on those feelings
Description of how long these feelings have existed
Belief that no one else could feel the same as I
Reminiscence of the pleasant times we shared
And our relationship's perfection
Recounting of the steps that led to our love's dissolution
Mostly involving my unfaithfulness and lies
Penitent admission of wrongdoing
Discovery of the depth of my affection
Regret over the lateness of my epiphany

(Chorus)
Title of the song
Naïve expression of love
Reluctance to accept that you are gone
Request to turn back time
And rectify my wrongs
Repetition of the title of the song

Enumeration of my various transgressive actions
Of insufficient motivation
Realization that these actions led to your departure
And my resultant lack of sleep and appetite
Renunciation of my past insensitive behavior
Promise of my reformation
Reassurance that you still are foremost in my thoughts now
Need for instructions how to gain your trust again
Request for reconciliation
Listing of the numerous tasks that I'd perform
Of physical and emotional compensation
CHORUS
Acknowledgment that I acted foolishly
Increasingly desperate pleas for your return
Sorrow for my infidelity
Vain hope that my sins are forgivable
Appeal for one more opportunity
Drop to my knees to elicit crowd response
Prayers to my chosen deity
Modulation and I hold a high note...
CHORUS
"
-Title of the Song" by: Davinci's Notebook
  • dr_corndog
    Basically the template model for every pop song that gets written.
    by dr_corndog at 04/27/06 1:31PM
  • the_denzel
    Wait 'till you hear 'em sing it, Doc. You will cry. I know I did.
    by the_denzel at 04/28/06 1:02PM
  • the_denzel
    You have just been tagged. See my blog for details.

    By the way, how's the moving company job going?

    by the_denzel at 05/25/06 12:22AM
  • mj
    That song makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
    by mj at 08/02/06 3:42PM
  • mj
    Erique should get on pleonast more often. ;)
    by mj at 08/02/06 3:42PM
  • aardvarks_bite
    Eric! How come you're not in Rivers either? Waaaaa!
    by aardvarks_bite at 08/15/06 2:21PM
  • the_denzel
    That's still one of the best songs in the history of Ever.
    by the_denzel at 09/08/06 2:20PM

Mr. Gates for President of the World!

I would like nominate Mr. Gates for president of the world...he's pretty much the best guy ever.
  • mr_gates
    ya man i am n tahnks i think ill be a good presedent
    by mr_gates at 11/14/05 10:51AM
  • rockman84
    Yes, that is why Xbox will soon overshadow all.
    by rockman84 at 11/14/05 11:09PM
  • smileofdawn
    Eric!!
    by smileofdawn at 11/15/05 12:31AM
  • dr_corndog
    Aw, I was afraid this would happen...Eric, you've abandoned Pleonast!
    by dr_corndog at 12/21/05 11:49AM

The Nintendo Revolution Controller (Genius or Bufoonery?)

I was a bit apprehensive when I first saw the Nintendo controller. Actually, I was really disappointed about the whole thing. BUT! I am now undecided, but still kinda excited to play with it....Can Nintendo hold its own with their new controller?????
  • dr_corndog
    We have no idea who you are but at least we have your opinions on the Revolution controller ;)
    by dr_corndog at 11/14/05 10:35AM
  • dr_corndog
    Welcome to Pleo, Eric
    by dr_corndog at 11/14/05 10:35AM