its my b-day on oct 7th thats in 4 hours ill be 13. thats awesome im finally a teen

Were doing a assingment in english its a writing assignment but its fun so here it is comment on it if you want to

Lost In a Cave
“come on I said. “I don’t know” Eddie stammered. “Eddie you’re going, and your ganna like it!” bellowed Heith. “Fine” Eddie said. “let’s met at the cave in the afternoon. Don’t forget we’re spending the night there. I waited at the cave. I could hear waterfalls in the distance. Heath finally showed up after 30 minutes. While I was drinking from a pool of water. I saw a long shadow pass over me and new it to be eddie.
“Lets go” I said passing rows of irregular shaped pillars. When we got in there were some shafts of light from the ceiling, and mushrooms growing in the distance. The smell of damp stone surrounded us. “I don’t like it here” said Eddie,just as a draft of icy cold air swept thru the room. The colorless walls looked to be sweating. We were in the main chamber with smaller tunnels going every direction. We walked down one of the smaller tunnels, letting eddie lead the way. We soon were surrounded by rope like moss, Eddie then jumped down onto a lower rock, but his neck got caught in the moss and started choking. heith and I ran down and tried to untangle it by the time we had gotten it off it was to late. "let's head back" i murmered in a frightened voice, it was then that i noticed that the darknedd looked strangley diffrente almost haunting. we started heading back ocasionally hearing bats schreeching or lizards scuttling along the ground. after wandering helplessly for hours on end we finally accepted the excruciating truth. We were lost.
"oh no, oh no, oh no" Heith said to himself over and over again. it was then that we saw a strange round extremely bright light. "hey we found them" called out someone who i didnt know. Just then Heith tripped on a slick stone, and hit his hard on the rocky surface of the cave. he lay still not stirring his chest not rising or falling rythmecially to show breathing. I had to accept the truth both the companions of mine were dead.

I'm writing this story in my room. So there you have it I had gotten out alive lucky,and not so lucky. But this is my story i hope you never have to experience the fear and pain i have felt ever in your life.


p.s. i like to write!!!!!

hey im finally getting on.its becauseim bored soo we lost to clearwater 52-0 .that stunk.so we play windfieild on tuesday but were out of school monday. were playing 3 marching songs in band right now ;smoke on the water,them changes, and el gato.thats about all



see ya

Ok we've had to games and lost both by at least 30 and we lost 48-0 to the cardinals and we play clearwater monday and they beat the cardinals so im pretty sure were dead so yeah. i'm on the drumline in band. and we get to go to worlds of fun for acompetion soo that'll be awesome.

hey guess what we got a foregn exchange student called sarah she's cool. 2 days ago she went to a swimming party at the criswells. i got invited then i got uninvited by emailie cause its jst for girls so yeah and yesterday she went to school for the first time in america . she is also the volyball manager.